Hello.My name is Mark. My hair is short and black.My eye are big.My ear are big.My nose is very tall.My mouth is small.My face is round. I like sports、play computer game and science.I like dog and cat. I like reading.名师点评：

In the composition,you are directly to introduce your characterize and your hobbies to us.Well done! 小作者在文章中简洁明了的介绍了自己的性格特征以及兴趣爱好.让人读完你的文章后，仿佛一下子就可以想象出春显的可爱模样！你真棒! 全文通顺，时态把握的非常准确，老师期待你篇幅更长，更加具体的自我介绍哦！文章写的不错，加油！（快乐学堂特聘教师：吴老师） 2009-5-13 9:58:08