Hello！My name is Gu Haonan. My English name is Alvin. I’m eleven years old. I live in Zhoushan. I love Zhoushan. I am a student in Nanhai Experimental School. At school I have many good friends. My teachers are friendly to us. I like playing pingpang, basketball and tennis. I like reading, too. I have many books in my study. I have a big family. There are five people in my family. They are Grandpa, Grandma, Daddy, Mummy and me. They love me very much and I love them very much, too.名师点评：小作者用英语做了自我介绍，将自己的姓名、年龄、家庭住址、就读学校等基本情况表达了清楚，从英语语法的角度出发，语法正确，表述完整。但是小作者在英语的书写上要注意哦，单词与单词之间要有空格，像这样看上去比较吃力哦！（学乐中国特聘教师：许奕文老师）2008-11-28 21:07:00