My mom is beautiful .She has long brown curly hair and two big eyes.She ''s tall.She has small mose.She''s active.She like clour isred.She dot like clour is blue.She like pigeon.She dot like pig.I love my mom .And she love me.名师点评：This article depicts a mother， mother''s appearance, hobbies, etc. are described in detail by authors.Article describes in detail and clearly.这是一篇英语写作，小作者描绘了自己的妈妈，将妈妈的外貌、爱好等情况进行了详细地描绘，语言流畅，表达清楚，从英语写作的角度将，语法还有些问题哦！第三人称的动词形式还是需要小作者注意呢！（学乐中国特聘教师：许奕文老师）2009-3-28 16:51:00