They have a card, although I didn''''t, but I used to replace composition

My name is YeQian, LanJiang in fifth grade four class of students. I very tall, but not too fat, love sports. I study in class, group leader English as endorsed. I like dancing, but not a professional training, but I still can jump some action.

I dare small, introverted, meet a stranger, won''''t talk to them. You don''''t know, I very fierce!

Once, I was sleeping, I touched me behind classmate, I woke up, I was in the wrong hs "bone" he gave a cry, so I didn''''名师点评：

本文是一篇自我介绍，小作者以My card 为名，构思新颖。文章从外貌，爱好，特长，有趣的事介绍了自己，小作者的词汇量很丰富，但是要注意用词和句子表达方面。For example: "Although"用在句子中后面不能用"but"。希望小作者能够继续努力，不断写出好作品和大家分享！（快乐学堂特聘教师：马老师） 2010-9-7 11:49:01