My name is WangJiawen.I＇m in class four,grade six.I have a round face,short hair and two big eyes.I＇m not very tall.I＇m really a lucky girl. 名师点评：

I am sure you are a lucky girl.A short and simple article.A luscious, vivid description.You’ve done a good job! 一篇简短明了的文章，包含了生动活泼的描述。如果不是一个象你一样灵动聪慧的女孩，怎么能做到呢？做得很棒哦！真的很希望看到你越来越多生动闪光的文字！（快乐学堂特聘教师：周老师） 2009-3-18 12:49:01