I have a brother,his name is MaWanjie.He is twelvey.He is a lovely boy.I like he very much.I often play with him.We are in the same school,but we don''''t in the same class .we often go to school from Monday to Friday on foot.名师点评：在这篇文章里，小作者简单地向我们介绍了她的 brother。文章语句很流畅，看来小作者的英文应该比较好。的确，用英语来练习写作文，更能激发同学们学习英语的兴趣。希望你再接再厉！同时，也希望你能做生活的有心人，多观察生活，了解生活，多积累，你的作文一定会越来越好！（学乐中国特聘教师：邹紫老师）2009-11-6 22:13:00