Today is Sunday.The sun is shining.So my mother,my father and l are will going to the Ocean Park.We go there by bus.Oh!We are in the Ocean Park now.There are many places in it.They are Butterfiy House,Shark Aquarium,Ocean Theatre and so on.Now,we are in the Ocean Theatre.We can see some seals and some dolphins in a big pool.Then we go to the Butterfly House.We can see some beautiful butterflies in it.I like the purple and blue one but my father likes the blue and black one.How happy today!名师点评：作为一个小学生，敢于用英语写作文是一种值得表扬的行为，但是，作者要注意了，英文的单词与单词之间是需要间隔的，如：Today is Sunday．除此之外，作者也要注意一下固定词组的搭配，myfatherandlarewillgoingtotheOceanPark.中的will应该删除。望下次作者能正确使用英文写作格式。（学乐中国特聘教师：吴萍老师）2010-4-21 12:31:00