Mr Hu is my Chinese teacher.He is tall and thin.He has short hair.He has big eyes,a big nose and a big mouth.He is very sthict.We all like him名师点评：The article introduces a Chinese teacher,describes teacher''s appearance.The Chinese teacher must be a good teacher.我们的小作者用英语描绘了自己的语文老师，重点描绘了老师的外貌，形象真实。而且从英语语法的角度上讲，用词准确，语法合理。但是小作者写错了一个单词哦！“He is very sthict”应该是“strict”哦！（学乐中国特聘教师：许奕文老师）2009-9-14 20:16:00